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Age:

bittersweet sixteen.

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Character Basics
Name: EDMUND ALEXANDER PEVENSIE.

"Don't ask me about this one. The full name's Edmund Alexander Pevensie. I don't have any idea where my parents got the name Edmund because as far as I can tell, nobody in my family's been named Edmund or something as strange. Alexander came from my grandfather and Pevensie... Well, that's obvious enough for someone who even has a brain. "

Alias(es)/Nickname(s): ED

"Most people just call me Ed. At least, those people that are close to me or I haven't left a bad impression on. There's not really much you can get as a nickname from Edmund. Mund just sounds really weird and Eddie sounds like a name for a pet. Lucy used to call me Grumpyhead because I teased her a lot. Used to though. "

Gender: MALE

"This is as far as I remember. I think i've been male for... Twelve years now. "

Age: TWELVE

"Yeah. Am slightly older than Lucy, a bit younger than Susan and definitely younger than Peter. I hate being the middle kid. "

Race: HUMAN

"Whatever you call it - homo sapien, son of adam, whatever, it all boils down to I'm human. "

Status/Title:

"You better sit down because this is a long one. I am King Edmund the Just, co-ruler of Narnia with Queen Lucy, Queen Susan and High King Peter, Duke of Lantern Waste, Count of the Western March and Knight of the Noble Order of the Table. Yeah, I know, its a mouthful. Just think of the carpal tunnel pain I get when I write a letter. "

Affiliation: NARNIA

"Why else would I have ran to battle when Peter shouted 'for narnia and for aslan!' at the first Battle of Beruna? Why else would I have the emblem of a lion on my shield? Why else would I have been king and a friend of the talking beast? Because of narnia! Because I am for narnia! Always. "

Character Appearance
Hair: SHORT, DARK BROWN, MESSY, SLIGHTLY CURLY

"Well... Uhh... My hair's really weird. I mean, compared to Lu and Pete and Su, I have no idea how my hair got the way it is. Pete's got blonde? Or is it brown? I'm not sure. Su's got brown hair and Lu's got light brown hair? And what do I get? Dark brown hair. You'd even think its black if you didn't know any better. I always keep it short, because I tend to look like a girl when it gets long and it irritates my eyes when it hangs before low on my forehead and obscures my eyesight when I'm horse riding. I never fix it. I don't use combs or anything. The way it is in the morning is the way it is all day, unless I'm nervous or thinking, in which case I have the habit of running my hand through my hair a lot. I think its from my mum, but my hair's a bit curly at the ends. Yeah. That's about it. "

Eyes: LIGHT BROWN

"I like my eyes. I've got unique eyes among us four Pevensies. Look at them. Pete's got blue eyes. Su's got blue eyes. Lu's got blue eyes. What do I get? Brown. Light brown really. The blue eyes came from my mum. Only I got the light brown eyes, which is from my dad. "

Overall:

Edmund has deep light brown eyes that can make one feel both welcomed and uninvited by just one glance at will. Edmund's eyes radiate off a lot of his feelings, and are most likely one of the few sources on which you can read Edmund's true emotions. Unlike the color of his eyes, the color of his locks are a darker shade of brown, often mistaken as the color of pitch black by many. Over the years his locks have grown just that tad bit and have the tendency of falling over his sight, often disturbing him.

They also, stand out extremely against his pale and white skin. Once even more pale, and despite the fact that his skin tone has darkened over the years, Edmund still holds a very pale and white skin tone. This once more, shows just how complicated the young man can be. Edmund is tall and slender, something he uses to his utmost advantage. He stands at a height of five feet, eight inches, and still growing! Edmund towers over his elder sister, however, still has to look up to his elder brother... Something he's not very fond of. Edmund is muscular as well, after all those battles and all of his experiences with Narnia, it was only bound to be this way.

Edmund has never cared much about clothing... Except for once maybe, when his brother made him wear a lady's coat. But, in general, Edmund is pleased with what he has to wear. His royal tunics, tailored his exact size, in his favorite colors, dark greens and blues, always know how to please him. Brown pants then again, accompany the tunics as well as a leather belt. For official meetings, formalities or special parties, Edmund may have something special tailored, merely because he has a name to keep up with as King.

On those special occasions, Edmund can also be seen wearing his crown. Despite the fact that it is ancient, it is still intact and found in the ruins of the previous Cair Paravel. Edmund is vain when it comes down to his crown, loving every second that he can have an excuse to wear it on top of his brown mess, showing everyone that he's King, for it is his honor and his pride. When in battle, Edmund wears the royal uniform for war. Wearing his red and silver tunic, on which Aslan is printed and of course, his armor.

Portrayal: SKANDAR KEYNES

"This one's been bugging me for a long time now. Some people at home... Well, at earth, they point out that I look like this actor, Skandar Keynes. I mean, I bet he's a weird bloke, that one. Who even gets named Skandar? What does that even mean? I don't know, but it sounds dodgy. I guess I do see the resemblance, I just don't like it that sometimes I get mistaken for him or probably him me. "

Character Personality
Likes:

"Is this in general or are you asking me about material things? I'll just lay down stuff I generally like. There's Turkish Delight, for starters, and we all know where that went. Haha. I like having my siblings around and knowing that I could trust on them always. I like having been able to rule Narnia alongside my brother and sisters and knowing that our time was called the Golden Age. I like having fun because what else is the point of life if there's not a bit of fun in everything you do? Of course, fun for me entails a bit of adventure, a lot of mischief, a lot of pranking and teasing, particularly on my siblings and especially particular on Su (she gets annoyed the fastest), a lot of challenges, a bit of sword fighting and fist fighting (which, in all modesty, I can say I have gotten good at. I haven't lost a match! except to Peter, but that's not counted) and there's the horse riding around Narnia. I like talking to the talking beasts, keep myself updated on how their lives are and knowing that they're happy. I like the sound of laughter. It just lures me in. I like being praised, I would admit to that, and I like beating Peter on something every once in a while. I like swimming and much as I hate to say this, I like a bit of trouble every now and then and trouble... I'm pretty sure it likes me back. Haha. "

Dislikes:

"Wow. This is a long list. I dislike Turkish Delight. Yeah, I know, its confusing because I like it too. I dislike Turkish Delight - the White Witch limited edition. Yeah. That one gets a kick out of parties. 'Oh, you get tricked by a box of sweeties? That's nice.' Yeah. Bollocks. I hate the White Witch. No, I loathe and despise the White Witch. I hate being serious for long periods of time. I can't stand having to keep still and keep a straight face. It hurts me. I hate boredom and silence, except sometimes when I want to be alone to think. I especially hate being underestimated, and I hate it more when i'm being underestimated by my friends or my siblings. It hurts more, seriously, it does. I hate being hugged or having to show my emotions or being kissed. If I see Lucy coming at me with her arms outstretched and her grin mischievous, I seriously run away. I hate being told what to do and anybody knows better than to do that, because I always do the exact opposite. I hate all the things I regret having done, especially betraying Peter and Susan and Lucy. It won't happen again, I swear. I hate not being listened to, I hate being ignored, I hate being criticized and I hate being tricked - and that's the bad kind, not the goofy kind. I hate the feeling that I'm useless, that I can't do anything, that I'm being rejected, that I did something wrong. Oh, and I hate causing people pain. Trust me, I've done enough of that in my twelve years of life. "

Strengths:

"I'm good at a lot of things. Sword fighting, hand to hand combat, making strategies and plans, being clever, surprising the enemy, knowing small bits of trivia that some people don't know, knowing how my people are and how they feel and what they need, basic stuff that comes with being a king. Oh, and I'm a good swimmer. There's also the fact that I'm fiercely loyal and my loyalty lies with my siblings, with my parents, with narnia and with aslan. From my experiences, I have grown to be more forgiving, understanding, trusting and trustworthy, and I know how to have fun. That's all there is to it. "

Weaknesses:

"Turkish delight! haha. Kidding. Well, I get into trouble a lot and sometimes, I don't even know I'm in trouble till it slaps me on the face. I can be really blunt sometimes and I don't know I've hurt someone till someone else tells me. I'm sorry, I can be an arse sometimes. I'm horribly rebellious when it comes to things that Peter say and want, and when it comes to Susan. Lucy, I can deal with. I'm stubborn as hell and equally annoying. I was built that way, I think we all were. Haha. I'm sarcastic all the time and I always, always panic when it comes to my siblings. I'm overprotective over them. I love them and I don't want to lose them again. "

General Personality:

As his title, King Edmund the Just refers, Edmund is a just person. Due to his own experience with the unjust in his previous lives in Narnia, he's the just one that will judge on a neutral basis, despite having the tendency of leaning to the weaker side. He is forgiving and can easily give someone a second chance if they regret their mistakes. Yes, Edmund is rather good willed toward others, finding joy in making his people happy.

Edmund Pevensie is a strong willed young man as well. Stubborn and determined, he'll stick by his opinions at all times and will even rebel against any other, for as long as he believes he is correct. Edmund is stubborn and will always drive his will through until proven wrong. It's just the way he is. This also means that Edmund is no good with authority, this authority specifically being his elder sister and brother. Neither Susan nor Peter have a strong grip on Edmund and when they try to 'boss him around' he'll do otherwise and ignore them flat out.

Edmund is passionate and fierce in anything he does. And usually, this gives him a lot of good results on whatever he was so passionate about. Had he not been so passionate in bringing down the white witch earlier, he wouldn't have broken her wand and he wouldn't have risked his own life, hadn't he been so passionate about his Narnia, he wouldn't have conceded to simply being king and not being High King instead of Peter. toAnything he does, Edmund will give his all... Even if it may have some serious side-effects. This also means though that Edmund acts on his impulsive. Yes, the young King of Old is rather impulsive. He seems to share the trait of acting-before-thinking with a lot of his siblings, except for maybe Susan, who is all about logic.

However, that doesn't mean all he does is impulsive. If anything, Edmund is rather strategic as well and may think of plans and schemes to get something done. He's sly, in a good way. And if he does think of some sort of plan, he'll stick to it... Unless the situation calls for something else, that something else most likely being one of his impulses.

Edmund, on a different note, is an extremely loyal fellow. Despite the fact that he was once upon a time the 'traitor', he learned his lesson and wouldn't ever, ever dream of betraying his family, nor his friends, nor his Narnians to anyone once more. No matter what, he'll stick with them through thick and thin, through the better and the worse. And anyone that dares lay a single hand upon them is dead meat. Yes, Edmund is rather overprotective over his siblings. Even if Susan and her 'logic', Peter and his drive to play boss, Lucy and her active chattering can get on his nerves from time to time, he wouldn't know what to do without them and would gladly do anything to keep them safe.

Edmund has always had his own way of making things known though. And, as many learned by experience, Edmund is sarcastic. He'll use sarcasm for a lot of things, to prove his points, to tell people something, or just to lighten the mood. On a slightly different note, Edmund can be grudging as well. Despite the fact he easily forgives another, if you get on his bad side, Edmund can hold long time grudges, so be warned. Then there are two more traits that are quite obvious, the first being that Edmund is a show-off. Yes, he's just a tad bit vain in his own peculiar way. Edmund loves to show people who he is and what he can do, hence the reason why he loves to wear his crown. Now the reason for this all, is of course the fact that since he's neither the eldest nor the youngest of the bunch, he likes to get some attention as well.

Which means, that Edmund is not any good at admitting his faults. He doesn't like to talk about them, but that doesn't mean he's not aware of them because if anything, he'll be able to point out more of his faults than anyone else.

All in all, Edmund allows his mind to guide his heart. But when it all comes down to it, he follows his heart only.

Character History
Parents: MR. AND MRS. HELEN PEVENSIE

"My father is Mr. Pevensie, obviously. Did you know he joined the war? yeah. He's an amazing father. My mother's Helen Pevensie. She's the most caring mother you'll ever meet and we're all lucky to have her. "

Siblings: PETER, SUSAN AND LUCY PEVENSIE

"The ones older than me are Peter and Susan, but that doesn't mean they're better! Haha. Kidding. Peter's noble and Susan's a pain. Joking, Su. Susan's a great archer. Then there's the ickle wee younger sister, Lucy. She's kind and very warm. And nice to play tricks on... Did I say on? I meant with. Nice to play tricks with! "

General History:

Edmund Pevensie was born into a family of four, consisting his mother and father and his two elder siblings, Peter and Susan. Edmund then again grew up under the constant care of these four, often finding himself more than annoyed at his two elder siblings. Not long after though, Lucy Pevensie was born into the family and the one thing Edmund had always 'wanted' happened to him. Most of their attention and care, at least so he thought, were given only to the youngest girl. Edmund felt ignored, even if he truly wasn't. All he could see though was the constant attention his younger sister and his elder siblings were fed.

In his childhood years, he started to show signs of going awry. In his old school, teachers gave feedback of him somehow scaring the other students with his intimidating approach towards them and the fact that he can be somewhat of a bully. He does have that tendency of looking down on the younger students while giving the older students something to laugh about. Though his studies never faltered, his personality and his becoming towards people started to turn for the worst. People generally avoided him because of his sour attitude towards anyone who even dares to question how he is and to those who have the courage to approach him often ends up leaving him because of his hurtful remarks and sarcastic snaps at them. Towards his siblings, he started to have a cold look. In his eyes, Peter became something of an egotistical, bighead who thought himself larger than any of them and constantly tried to find cracks in his armor. Every jib he can, he attacks Peter and tries to bring him down a notch. Susan became like an irritating professor to him, continuously gibbering on about logical things and often enough answered her sarcastically just to annoy her. Out of all his siblings though, Lucy got the worst of his turn of attitude. He constantly took a chance to make her cry and tease her, which also became the reason for his and Peter's constant feuds. Lucy almost always forgave him though, which more or less urged him on to continue it. In front of his parents, he would seem like just your ordinary son, although they did have an idea in their minds that Edmund was changing, and not for the better. They let time take its course though, and knew that he would find himself soon enough.

And despite the fact that he got along with his three siblings as he grew older, for as far as siblings get along, Edmund always remained jealous of his siblings. It wasn't until the war though, when their father left home to go to battle, that Edmund openly showed his dislike. Peter instantly took the role of 'father' and it quite annoyed Edmund, to say the least. To him only two people had the right to boss him around and those people were his parents, not Susan and most certainly not Peter. To Edmund, it didn't take long before the declaration came that all children were to leave London for it no longer was a safe place.

It was then that the four children were evacuated to the country on board of a train. Apparently, they were taken in by a Professor. Professor Diggory to be exact. The old man lived a wealthy castle, typical for the country. The house was full of hidden mysteries and places to explore. One fine day though, the rain was pouring down from the heavens and restricted the Pevensie children to go play outside. Lucy had come up with the bright idea of playing hide and seek, and somehow, all had acted on the thought, finding their hiding spot whilst Peter counted. However, their game of hide and seek was rudely interrupted when Lucy Suddenly came barging in, claiming that she had been gone for hours in a land in the upstairs wardrobe.

No one seemed to believe her, and neither did Edmund.

It wasn't until later, when Peter and Susan had been asleep, that Lucy woke Edmund... Not on purpose, but never having been a good sleeper, Edmund had been awoken by the little noise the younger girl made. He followed her to the spare room, into the wardrobe and there didn't seem to come an ending to this wardrobe. Instead, Edmund ended up falling through the end of the wardrobe, landing in the cold snow. He searched for Lucy, called out for her, but Lucy was long gone... Hence why he went exploring himself, almost ending up under the sled of the White Witch.

He was attacked shortly after by a .... Dwarf. Edmund couldn't believe it! It was a dwarf! It was then that a cold, icy voice called out for the dwarf to stop, ordered him to bring the boy to her. The woman seemed to be nothing like the dwarf when Edmund first met her. She was gentle, nice, offered him food (it was magic food though, might I add) and told him she was a queen, and that she had been looking for a boy to be her prince. It was then that she asked him about his siblings, told him that he could be her prince but that he'd need servants. Edmund was reLuctant about his siblings at first, but after a bit more of that magical Turkish delight she gave him, he promised her he would lead his siblings to her.

Later on, she let him go and he easily found his way to the Lamp Post again. It was there that he bumped into Lucy, who was returning home as well. When Lucy later woke up their two other siblings though, claiming that it had to exist for Edmund saw it as well, Edmund denied it every way possible, not wanting to share Narnia with his elder siblings. Sharing it with Lucy was something he could stand, but sharing with Susan and Peter? No way. Hence why he lied, told the two elder that he was merely playing along and hurting Lucy even more than she already was in the process. It still is, to this day, something that makes him feel deeply ashamed of himself. However, he lied either way and didn't return to Narnia after that.

It wasn't until the day where his siblings and Edmund got themselves into trouble that he saw Narnia again. Lucy had led them to the wardrobe and to save their own skin, the four siblings had entered the wardrobe, somehow ending up in the snowy land which was Narnia. It was then though that he was accused of being a liar and was given a lady's coat for their travel to Mr. Tumnus, as Lucy would lead them there. When they arrived though, Mr. Tumnus was taken away and locked up by the Narnian Police. They met Mr. Beaver, who led them to the dam, a place where they would be safe for a little while. Edmund ran away though, whilst Mr. Beaver told them about the prophecy.

When the Queen heard that Edmund had failed at bringing his siblings, Edmund was shown her true side and was locked up in the dungeons. It was in the pit of the dungeons that he met Mr. Tumnus, who had asked him if he could have Edmund's dry bread that he wasn't going to eat. Edmund and Mr. Tumnus talked for a while. And although he protested when Mr. Tumnus was turned to stone, the Witch instantly knew how to quiet him and make him Sulk. Not much later, Edmund was taken by the White Witch on her sled to the forest, where she would prepare her army. Edmund soon came to realize that he had chosen the wrong side and finally understood the importance of the mistake he had made by trusting that witch.

All in all, Edmund soon lost hope and believed that his siblings wouldn't come for him, for he had betrayed them after all. His surprise was big when a small part of the Narnian Army came to his rescue, returning Edmund to his siblings and to Aslan. Upon arriving though, Aslan spoke to him, they had a conversation about what had happened and about the importance of the events that had taken place. Aslan silenced the other three Pevensies, telling them that since Aslan had spoken to Edmund, there was no need for an investigation or scolding from the Pevensie's part. Edmund was grateful though when his siblings didn't question him but instead, took him back in, made him feel welcome once more.

And when Peter suggested that the other three Pevensies had to return home, it was Edmund that objected, protested dearly. For Edmund knew better than anyone how Narnia needed them around. Not much later, Edmund was taken to training with Peter and he was given a sword he would surely be able to put to use on the battlegrounds. All was well until Jadis suddenly showed up, demanding that she would be given 'the traitor', Aslan requested to speak to her in private though and somehow Edmund was safe... For Aslan had secretly made a deal with the White Witch, saving Edmund in the progress. It wasn't until late in the night, that Edmund and Peter were awoken by one of the tree spirits, claiming that their sisters and Aslan were gone.

Instantly, the army and advisers were assembled, ending up in several plans for the battle with Jadis and her army. That day they went to war, and it was that day that Edmund acted on impulse, a vain attempt to save the one sibling he had never liked all too much and broke the Witch's wand. Despite trying to save the other, Edmund was the one that got harmed, as the Witch stabbed him with her broken wand. Edmund can still remember just how confused and amazed he had been, how pain had been eating him, how he had slowly fallen to the ground, bleeding quite a lot. And he can still remember how Lucy came to his rescue just in time with her gift from Father Christmas.

And instantly, after the Pevensies were sure Edmund was okay, he was pulled into a hug by Peter. Ever since, needless to say, they've become as thick as thieves and the bond between the four siblings was fully restored. Edmund was later on crowned at Cair Paravel as King Edmund, the Just, bound to rule under the reign of the High King with his two sisters, and he was gifted the Western Woods. Together, the siblings reigned for years, until one day when they were out hunting they fell back into the normal world, they went back through the wardrobe. It was a year until they returned, and despite the fact that all had tried to adjust to the normal life, none of the four seemed to have accepted this.

Hence why all four are so glad to be back in Narnia. They found Cair Paravel to be in ruins though, but that didn't deter them from th happiness they felt at being back in the place they felt truly at home. Other than Lucy, Edmund was the happiest to be back, because he never really did feel at ease with having ruled Narnia for years and in just one day and one mistake, he was back to where he used to be and back to being a boy, having to act as though none of what happened to them in Narnia was real. Still, now that he's back, he's eager to find out just what happened while they were gone, why Cair Paravel, their beloved castle, was in ruins and why, why was nobody here to remember that they were Kings and Queens? Well, that last question was really more to himself. He wanted to get back in the swing of things and if there was something going on: a battle, a war, confusion, anything, he was ready to help.

Other/Notes:

If I think of something, I'll let you know.

Sample
RP Sample:

Maybe going over her lines again was going to jinx it, that’s the only thing that Isabella was worried about. It was like her French oral exam all over again. She had revised over and over again. She was the most confident person going into that test. She didn’t do very well. She didn’t do well at all. She choked. It was like everything she had learnt was gone. She looked like a complete fool, stuttering, looking up at the ceiling. It’s safe to say that Isabella really doesn’t want to experience that again. Though Isabella didn’t want to be stuttering on set either. She was a professional after all. Sure, a few mistakes were fine but you really needed to be at her French oral exam to understand why Isabella is currently feeling the way she is. She really needed a cookie. Or caffeine. A coffee would be amazing right now. But Isabella would keep her mind on the task at hand. No coffee until these lines were second nature. Isabella really worked herself into the ground sometimes. The lines were easy. The nerves on the other hand, were not. Isn’t that always the case?

A smile graced her lips as she let her fingers trail along the rip of the cup containing the coffee she had drunk earlier. The lectures she would get from her mother about drinking coffee at her age were obscene. She could drink coffee if she wanted too. At least it wasn’t alcohol. Isabella never touched the stuff. She didn’t like what it did to people. She wasn’t a drink virgin though. She had her fair share of booze at one stage in her high school years, under the influence of the wrong crowd. Worst three months of her life. Luckily it only was three months. She might have done something a lot worse if she stayed in that group for much longer. Luckily her brother came in to save the day. God, she owed so much to that dynamic duo. Too much actually. Maybe she could pay someone to get rid of them. Only kidding. Isabella loves her two brothers. They’re her bodyguards. Even if they’re just under fifty miles away. They were even scarier further away. You would never know when they’d pop up out of nowhere. They tended to do that a lot. Constantly popping by for family reunions. Just because they both had fast cars, doesn’t mean they have to use them to come bug her. Though it did make her happy to see the pair every time they came to visit. But she would never tell them that.

Isabella had pretty much given up revising her lines now, more doodling on the spare pieces of paper in front of her. She really needed to improve that attention span of hers. It’s not that she was lazy, she just got bored. And doodling was the more appealing option. What was she doodling? Well, that’s a mystery. It looks like squiggles. Though she might have some hidden artistic talent hidden underneath all that hair. Nope. She attempted to draw a bumblebee for mother’s day, her mom received a drawing of a potato. That’s how good Isabella was at drawing. She’d just never paid attention in art class. It was boring. Go figure. But Isabella could guarantee that she was the best squiggler in all of Hollywood. Actually that’s guaranteed no to be true. Oh well. At least she always had acting to fall back on. And a career in mechanics. She’d make her brother give her a job. Or she’d use force on him. No. She’d get her other brother to use force on him. It wasn’t Isabella’s fault that she wasn’t a violent person.

Isabella groaned as she glanced back at the script next to her. She was having an internal conflict with herself. Maybe she should revise her lines a bit more. The decision was ripped from her hands as she heard a knock on the trailer door. One of Izzy’s eyebrows rose slightly, she wasn’t supposed to be shooting and she wasn’t expecting anybody. Though she was known to be forgetful. Isabella slowly pushed herself out of her seat, only realizing how comfortable she had made herself. It was probably a good thing that the person had gotten her to move now rather than later. She probably wouldn’t be able to get up when she was actually supposed to be shooting. Her legs were pretty much jelly by the time she had reached the door. Her leg was practically dead, if you dropped an anvil on it, Isabella probably wouldn’t feel it. That’s how dead it was.

Isabella opened the door to find one Teddy Schroder standing there. ”I didn’t fall asleep did I? I’m not shooting yet, or at least I don’t think I’m shooting yet.” Isabella began her rant before realizing what she had said, “I mean, hi.” She greeted, giving a cheesy smile at the end of it to hide her slight embarrassment at her rant. She ranted a lot. It’s something she did because she was nervous. Then again she does it when she isn’t nervous too. Maybe it’s more of a habit than a nervous quirk. ”We talking outside or are we talking inside?” Izzy asked, throwing the door between her hands. Not exactly throwing, more passing the door from one hand to the other. It wasn’t that heavy after all. It was more a flimsy piece of metal that allowed them access to the trailer they were allowed to use while waiting to shoot their next scene.

Izzy and Teddy had been going out for little over a year. And it’s safe to say that Isabella was extremely attached to him. Seeming clingy is the last thing that she’d want to be but he really is her rock, for lack of a better word. It was impossible to count the amount of guys who had played around with Isabella’s heart in high school. It just taught her not to give her heart away too easily. Which is why she’s slightly worried about her current relationship. Though she would constantly reprimand herself about it. She just needed to get used to not being used in a relationship. It would take a little while but Isabella hoped she’d be able to do it. She just had to be a tough cookie. That’s what her father used to say. The daddy dearest. Every girl’s hero. He happened to be the chef of the family. Which tended to surprise some people. He didn’t really seem like the cooking type while her mother was the epitome of it. Though he really could make the best apple pie in the state. Hands down. Speaking of food, Isabella’s stomach growled in protest at the lack of food it’d relieved today. ”If you have food with you, I would be eternally grateful to you.” Isabella stated, beaming up at Teddy. It didn’t really matter if he didn’t, well it did a little. But they could just go out and get some.

[Lucy Pevensie]

This is really good! The only thing I can see is that you shouldn't refer to events in Prince Caspian, at least, not past the point we're at in the plot (with the Pevensies just having re-entered Narnia).  For one thing, plot events might happen here differently than they did in the book or the movie.

Also, Edmund should be 11 years old in this RP (as he's 10 or 11 in the books). You can have him be 12 at most, but most definitely not 13.

Thirdly, I'd prefer if you capitalize the IC portions, and just maybe enclose them in quotation marks.  It's always hard for me to read things that aren't capitalized correctly!

And finally, double-checking for grammar mistakes, etc. is always good!

Let me know when you've made the changes, and I'll take another look!

[Edmund Pevensie [inactive]]

EDITED !

i've pretty much done all that you asked, but i'm not sure about the grammar mistakes.
i've edited some, but i'm not sure how many there are exactly, so i can't be too sure that i've edited it all.
i think 'tis be okay though.

[Lucy Pevensie]

You still have a couple of references to him being thirteen in your app, and while I'd still like you to change that, I'm not going to stop that from letting this app be

Accepted!

Hooray for having all the Pevensies again! Please jump into the "Homecoming" thread on the island as soon as you have a chance.