Lucy Pevensie
Queen of Narnia
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Character's Gender:  Affiliation: For Narnia!
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Misha |
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Human |
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Adjusting from being a celebrated 23 year old Narnian queen to being an ordinary 8 year old English schoolchild would be hard for anyone. Lucy did as well as anyone could. But she was rarely truly happy.
For a year, Lucy tried over and over to get back to Narnia, but to no avail. She did not give up hope, though, and now, at last, her faith seems to have borne fruit. She is back in Narnia, her true home, to restore Prince Caspian to his rightful throne. A daunting task? Maybe. But she's in Narnia; she can face anything. |
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« Reply #0 on: March 01, 2008, 01:11:35 PM » |
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Wow, a very detailed and thorough profile! A couple of nit-picky points:
According to the Narnian Timeline I linked to in Ed's profile, Su is actually 12/13. But as I said there, it's not canon strictly speaking so 14 could be reasonable.
Also, I was looking up something in Dawn Treader, and happened to notice a line that mentioned that Su actually wasn't good at books, but was otherwise very old for her age. That kind of surprised me, since I always thought of her as very intelligent. But I guess it makes sense. She still is intelligent, but she has more common sense, maturity, and reasonableness than book smarts. Anyway, that's something to think about, because that implies she wouldn't be a bookworm.
Finally, I personally would add hints about how she later rejects Narnia into her return from Narnia. This isn't necessary - we don't know that she exhibits any symptoms of this after her first visit. She could have changed to view Narnia that way after being told she'd never return and because she's grown older. Still, my personal opinion is that since she didn't know she'd return to Narnia after the first visit, and because she's still so utterly reasonable even early on, that she might show some signs of later turning away even after the first visit.
Anyway, those were the only things I noticed!
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CotM - Mar. 2010
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It was just a little fun, lighten up. (rubs his cheek) You're lucky you're a lady, else I'd have boxed your ears.
