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CotM - Mar. 2010
Character of the Month
Prince Caspian

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Played by Cara

"Cara has managed to...create a character that is both mythical and life-like. Impulsive, moody, and yet kind and good-hearted, Caspian is just beginning to show the makings of a true leader."
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Last 15 Shouts:
April 11, 2010, 09:07:48 PM
*wanders in an away-from-them-wardly direction*
April 06, 2010, 07:38:36 PM
Irritations indeed... *growls and sits on the ground, holding her head*
April 04, 2010, 08:10:18 PM
Alright, let's avoid fighting among ourselves. Save those irritations for the battlefield.
April 02, 2010, 11:25:42 PM
*grabs at the throbbing ache in her head* You! This hasn't a thing to do with you unless you're about ready to hand over my weapon! *groans cause it REALLY hurt* You... *slouches against a tree*
April 02, 2010, 11:24:35 PM
Angry It was just a little fun, lighten up. (rubs his cheek) You're lucky you're a lady, else I'd have boxed your ears.
April 02, 2010, 11:23:03 PM
D:< (swats Arina upside the head)
April 02, 2010, 11:20:46 PM
I do believe I was well within my rights, making unfounded accusations! And I could have very well hit him with something else if some feathered maiden hadn't snatched away my bow!
April 02, 2010, 11:19:11 PM
>:/ That was completely uncalled for.
April 02, 2010, 11:18:42 PM
:O
April 02, 2010, 11:18:21 PM
*slaps the despicable de la Braose man*
April 02, 2010, 11:15:48 PM
XD
April 02, 2010, 11:12:38 PM
Young WHAT?! *please imagine a rather screechy voice as she thinks of a way to kill person*
April 02, 2010, 11:07:17 PM
Ahh, young love Grin
April 02, 2010, 10:26:40 PM
-grins-
April 02, 2010, 10:08:49 PM
*scowls and says through clenched teeth* I believe I disagree.
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« on: November 24, 2009, 06:05:14 PM »

Note: Yes, I know that a separate account is needed for any new characters.  I will create a new account when this one is accepted.
About You
Name: rocklobster
Age: 34
How did you find us: googled
Rules Password: [Password Accepted ~Misha]

Character Basics
Full Name:Pattertwig
Alias(es)/Nickname(s): (if your character has any)
Gender: Male
Age:8 (in squirrel years)
Species: squirrel
Status/Title:messenger
Affiliation: Narnia!
Character Appearance
Hair/Fur/Feathers: Light beige
Eyes: blue
Overall: Pattertwig is much bigger and smarter than the dumb squirrels one would see on Earth.  He has a very bushy tail with a  white stripe down the middle.  His coat is slightly darker in the winter than it is in the warmer months.  He has four small legs.

Portrayal: Voiced by Harry Gregson-Williams


Character Personality
Likes: (at least 5)
  • Running
  • Climbing
  • Talking
  • Spring
  • Nuts
  • Berries
Dislikes: (at least 5)
  • Hawks
  • Owls
  • Falcons
  • being idle
  • Winter (he hates hibernating! Grin)
Strengths: (at least 5)
  • Fastest squirrel in Aslan's camp
  • Decent intelligence
  • Good at hiding
  • size makes it easy for him to infiltrate the enemy
  • Almost as courageous as Reepicheep
Weaknesses: (at least 5)
  • Easily distracted
  • Useless in winter
  • Is a real chatterbox
  • gullible
  • hyperactive
General Personality: (At least 3 paragraphs)
There are three words that describe Pattertwig best: hyperactivity, loyalty, and integrity.  All of these qualities actually help him survive in Narnia's forests.  They are also the reasons he was chosen for Old Narnia.  He has a mischief streak, but the current battle has kept it under control for the most part.  He realizes the future of Narnia is more important than his frivolity.
Pattertwig is extremely hyperactive.  He is blessed with incredible speed.  He's not nearly as fast as a cheetah or a peregrine falcon, but he can outrun most other animals.  Despite the fact that he is quite chattery and easily distracted, he is a great messenger.  He has often let his hyperactivity be a liability, but most of the other animals tolerate him.
Pattertwig is exceedingly loyal and is good friends with Reepicheep, despite the fact that they are different species. He will often offer new friends nuts as a gesture of friendship.
Pattertwig has a healthy curiousity.  This has not caused much trouble as it actually helps in his role as a spy and messenger.  HIs only real problem is that his curiosity is linked to the fact that he is easily distracted.  If something catches his attention, he may follow that instead of what he's been ordered to do. He's been getting better at following instructions, but still needs a little work.
Pattertwig's other great weakness besides his chattery nature is his gullibility.  Although he is slowly learning that not everyone can be trusted, he can easily be exploited.  Most of his friends do not exploit him, but he has been known to fall for pranks.

Character History
Family: He has a mother, a father, and five siblings: three sisters and two brothers

General History: (At least 3 paragraphs)
Pattertwig comes from a long line of respectable squirrels.  His family is exceedingly loyal to Narnia and is known far and wide for its reputation.  They all served the rulers of Narnia well.  They were all messengers and spies.  Their size and speed came in quite handy because it gave them ease in getting behind enemy lines.
That all changed when the Telmarines invaded Narnia. The invasion scattered Pattertwig's ancestors to all the ends of Narnia.  Pattertwig's parents did their best to instill in their children the values that had defined their family. Pattertwig learned that Aslan was the one he was supposed to serve, not the Telmarines. 
Pattertwig learned everything he could about how best to survive and serve Narnia.  He learned the basic survival techniques.  He learned when was the best time to start harvesting for nuts so that he wouldn't go hungry in the winter.  However, he learned to hate hibernating.  He doesn't like to sleep because nothing happens. 
When he first met Caspian, he immediately somehow knew he was the one who would best lead Narnia, despite the fact that he was of the same descent as the invaders.  He accepted him as king and offered him a nut.  The squirrel has been a favorite of Caspian's ever since. His humor and his loyalty have kept him at Caspian's side.  He is eager to show Caspian that he is reliable.  Now if only he could keep his mind on the right goals.
Other/Notes: (Is there anything else we should know about your character?)

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RP Sample:
please see my Kitsune application.
« Last Edit: November 29, 2009, 04:25:29 PM by Pattertwig » Logged
Lucy Pevensie
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« Reply #1 on: November 28, 2009, 03:57:56 AM »

Hi! Sorry it took me so long to review this. 

First, you do need to create a new account before you're accepted.  So go ahead and create that, and I'll link your accounts so you can switch between them easily. (I can also change your above post so that it looks like you posted it with the correct account).

Second, the main thing here is that you need to expand your personality and history sections. They each need to be three good-sized paragraphs long, which means about 5-7 sentences for each paragraph.  Your history section in particular could go more in depth about Pattertwig's life; about half of what you have is about Pattertwig's family, and not about Pattertwig himself.

So get those changes made, and then I'll gladly take another look! Cheesy
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« Reply #2 on: November 28, 2009, 08:32:11 AM »

OK, new account created.  Now work your mod magic and I'll edit the profile tomorrow.
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« Reply #3 on: November 28, 2009, 12:22:52 PM »

Done! You can now switch between accounts using the "Switch Accounts" tab at the top. Smiley
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« Reply #4 on: November 30, 2009, 02:13:42 AM »

Alright, better! I'm going to say that this application is

Accepted!


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« Reply #5 on: November 30, 2009, 06:43:37 AM »

Sweet! Mind if I join your thread?
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