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CotM - Mar. 2010
Character of the Month
Prince Caspian

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Played by Cara

"Cara has managed to...create a character that is both mythical and life-like. Impulsive, moody, and yet kind and good-hearted, Caspian is just beginning to show the makings of a true leader."
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Last 15 Shouts:
April 11, 2010, 09:07:48 PM
*wanders in an away-from-them-wardly direction*
April 06, 2010, 07:38:36 PM
Irritations indeed... *growls and sits on the ground, holding her head*
April 04, 2010, 08:10:18 PM
Alright, let's avoid fighting among ourselves. Save those irritations for the battlefield.
April 02, 2010, 11:25:42 PM
*grabs at the throbbing ache in her head* You! This hasn't a thing to do with you unless you're about ready to hand over my weapon! *groans cause it REALLY hurt* You... *slouches against a tree*
April 02, 2010, 11:24:35 PM
Angry It was just a little fun, lighten up. (rubs his cheek) You're lucky you're a lady, else I'd have boxed your ears.
April 02, 2010, 11:23:03 PM
D:< (swats Arina upside the head)
April 02, 2010, 11:20:46 PM
I do believe I was well within my rights, making unfounded accusations! And I could have very well hit him with something else if some feathered maiden hadn't snatched away my bow!
April 02, 2010, 11:19:11 PM
>:/ That was completely uncalled for.
April 02, 2010, 11:18:42 PM
:O
April 02, 2010, 11:18:21 PM
*slaps the despicable de la Braose man*
April 02, 2010, 11:15:48 PM
XD
April 02, 2010, 11:12:38 PM
Young WHAT?! *please imagine a rather screechy voice as she thinks of a way to kill person*
April 02, 2010, 11:07:17 PM
Ahh, young love Grin
April 02, 2010, 10:26:40 PM
-grins-
April 02, 2010, 10:08:49 PM
*scowls and says through clenched teeth* I believe I disagree.
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« Reply #0 on: October 25, 2009, 01:01:05 AM »

Hey! Thanks for making changes.  However, it is important to remember that Narnia is based more or less on the medieval era in Europe.

From the Character Application Rules:
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-Your character should keep to the Narnia universe. They should not have superpowers, starships, a secret alien identity, etc. The technology of Narnia is medieval, with chainmail, swords, arrows and magic. There are no cannons, crossbows, guns, planes or cars.


More specifically to your character, there's no rock music, no business corporations, no phones, etc.  Also, you still don't quite have things in line with the Prince Caspian canon. Have you read the book or seen the movie? If not, I suggest you read the Plot Summary on Wikipedia. All non-humans are currently in hiding (and are thought by the humans not to exist). So therefore, centaurs wouldn't exactly bring Jack to the king, for the king would likely have them killed.

I hope that helps! As before, let me know if you have questions!
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